Thursday, October 2, 2008

2 more poems!!!!

Yah, recently dunno y, come up poem like drink water like tt.

K. This wan is from my own experience of taking my opponent lightly and then got hit hard as a result.

5th Poem titled: 后悔

关帝单骑走麦城
全因一时太轻敌
我今方知他心情
只恨当初看不明 ~种川作品集

Tio,next one is i derived after i read xiao feng blog and is abt a letter to a gal he like. After reading i summarise his feeling in 4 chinese sentences,and this poem came out:

6th Poem titled: 真情流露

只识三月似三秋
为独对你难忘怀
红颜若怕薄情郎
愿求赐时显真情 ~种川作品集

Any comments or feedbacks can share or discuss with me regarding these not so good poems i written!!!

Cheers!!!

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